avatarTina L. Smith

Summary

"California Dreaming" is a poem that captures the vibrant and transient beauty of California poppies, likening them to a seductive, opiate-like experience.

Abstract

The poem "California Dreaming" by Tina L. Smith, published in 2020, is a vivid depiction of the life cycle of California poppies. It begins with the awakening of the flowers at dawn, unfurling with the warmth of the sun. The poppies are described in rich, sensory language, comparing their bright orange hue to a blazing sunset and their movement to a provocative dance. The flowers are personified as a "showy seductress," tirelessly teasing with their pollen and vibrant color. As the day ends, the poppies induce a soporific effect, dropping their petals in a delicate, sequential fall, culminating in a state of "sweet narcosis" after a day of intense beauty. The poem is a tribute to the multifaceted artist Liz Ball, acknowledging her talents in writing, healing, and painting, and expresses deep appreciation for her creation of a treasured painting.

Opinions

  • The author, Tina L. Smith, holds Liz Ball in high regard, admiring her multifaceted talents as a writer, healer, and artist.
  • The poem conveys a deep appreciation for the beauty of California poppies, emphasizing their vivid colors and the emotional impact they have.
  • The poppies are personified, suggesting the author sees them as lively, dynamic entities with their own allure and life force.
  • The language used implies that the author finds the poppies' life cycle to be a captivating and almost narcotic spectacle, with the flowers' beauty being both intense and fleeting.
  • The dedication at the end of the poem indicates a personal connection and a sense of gratitude from the author to Liz Ball for her artistic creation.

Poetry

California Dreaming

Opiate beauty

Painting of California Poppies by Liz Ball. Photo by author (self).

Awakening from a tight hug,

Unfurling sleepily in the dawn’s warmth.

Orange as a blazing sunset,

Turning to fierce, eye-piercing gold.

Swaying provocatively on lacy fronds.

A showy seductress, teasing tirelessly with pollen and color.

Soporific, as the sun sets,

Dropping delicate petals, one, two, three.

Spent from a single day of intense beauty.

Then, sweet narcosis.

© Tina L. Smith, 2020

Some paint with words. Some capture art with color and paint. Some create healing energy. This poem is dedicated to my friend Liz Ball, who does all three. A writer, healer, and artist. Thank you for creating this beautiful painting, which I will treasure forever.

Poetry
Flowers
Opium
Beauty
Art
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