avatarLouise Foerster

Summary

The content reflects on the joy and freedom of childhood experiences with water, inspired by a collaborative poem prompt, and invites others to share their stories and poetry.

Abstract

The article is a reflective piece that begins with a promise to undertake an unspecified action at the reader's behest, hinting at a journey of discovery and growth. It poetically recounts the author's memories of learning to navigate the water's edge, starting with the support of a loved one and eventually finding freedom and exhilaration in the act of swimming. The narrative transitions from the personal to the communal, crediting the prompt "let freedom ring" from Kenneth Johnson for sparking recollections of carefree days spent by the sea. The author reminisces about the simple pleasures of youth, the sense of liberation experienced in the embrace of nature, and the enduring joy of watching waves. The article concludes with an invitation to other writers and poets to contribute their own stories or poems in response to the prompt "Summer Afternoon," emphasizing the value of sharing one's narrative and the interconnectedness of creative expression.

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  • The author expresses a deep connection with the water, which symbolizes freedom and joy.
  • The act of swimming is portrayed as a metaphor for personal growth and the overcoming of challenges.
  • The importance of community and shared experiences is highlighted

Because You Asked Me, I Will

(I was going to do it anyway…)

Photo by Hello I’m Nik 🎞on Unsplash

I don’t know how to do this. But if you’ll hold my hand, I’ll take a step.

She clutched the warm hand that was always there, Smiled up at the face that loved her, started first venture Into that hugest of bathtubs, England a far-off, dusky blue promise Tentative feet stepping into sparkling cold on shifting pebbled sand, Surprised gasp at slap of wave over ankles, grabbing the warm hand, And jumping up over the next wave, exulting in this new dance she learned.

Later shorelines held new hands, novel delights, and weightless hours with Dashes into sparkling cold, explorer adventures, impish joy When the reliable bottom fell away and she bobbed, floated, swam free Of studies, responsibilities, worries yielding to that hugest of blue. There, drifting in endless, she gazed up at fathomless blue and Promised the sky that she would soar, swoop, and rise triumphant

Roaring her freedom song for everyone to join a celebration of life Starting with that first floating in warm safe embrace Transformed to wobbling steps, later to stride, and later splashing revel.

Starting with the prompt “let freedom ring” from Kenneth Johnson, I was transported to a lifetime near the water, endless hours of floating and emerging salt-grimed and delirious with joy.

That was little kid freedom with family, friends, days in sun and sand with nowhere else to be, nothing else to do but raise my face to the sky and roar exhilaration. It is a pleasure to this day to watch waves, all the same and all different, requiring careful inattention to nothing but the shimmering water.

Here is the prompt that started it all by Martin Rushton: The Never-Ending Poem.

From Kenneth Johnson comes this story and his kind invitation to play:

In turn, I invite these Medium poets to play if they would like (and I sure hope that they do), tagging me and enjoying what comes with the prompt “Summer Afternoon.” If the prompt moves you, play — or pass it on….: Elle Rogers, E. Scott Alighieri, Paula Dotson Frew, Vivienne Teh, Sylvia Wohlfarth, Priyanka Srivastava, Bradley J Nordell, Jessica Lee McMillan, Steve Hawkins, Anna Rozwadowska.

And? Even if you weren’t specifically named, know that the world needs your story, your poetry, your summer afternoon thoughts….Think them, write them, send them on their merry way….

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