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Summary

The web content presents a personal reflection on the experience of waking up to a beautiful morning, questioning whether it is real or a dream, and invites feedback from specific individuals on the author's interpretation of the moment through a Haiku.

Abstract

The article titled "Awake or Dreaming" captures a serene morning scene, emphasizing the warm embrace of the morning sun as it stirs someone from sleep. The author uses a Haiku, "Good Morning Everyone," to convey the tranquility and wonder of the moment, pondering whether the experience is reality or a pleasant dream. This poetic expression is inspired by a real-life incident where a friend believed she was dreaming during a sunny getaway in the hills. The piece concludes with an open invitation for several named individuals, including Dr. Mehmet, Tree Langdon, CPA, Geetika Sethi, and others, to share their perspectives on the Haiku's effectiveness in capturing the essence of the experience.

Opinions

  • The author seems to value the input of specific individuals, suggesting a community of peers or colleagues whose opinions are respected.
  • There is a personal connection to the Haiku, as it is based on an actual event experienced by the author or someone close to them.
  • The use of a Haiku to express the beauty of the morning and the questioning of reality indicates a preference for concise, impactful poetry to convey deep emotions and thoughts.
  • The inclusion of a photograph by Olexandr Ignatov suggests that the visual element complements the written Haiku, enhancing the overall sensory experience for the reader.
  • By asking whether the Haiku does justice to the experience, the author displays humility and a desire for constructive criticism to refine their poetic craft.

Awake or Dreaming

Good Morning Everyone ( A Haiku)

Photo by Olexandr Ignatov on Unsplash Morning sun

Lovely morning sun,

Woke up from my slumber so dear,

Awake or dreaming?

(I have actually seen a friend of mine when we went for a short holiday to the hills. Sho thought she was dreaming but she was actually awake and there was a good deal of sunshine outside.

Dr. Mehmet Tree Langdon, CPA,CGATTGeetika Sethi, Whitney Rose, Agnes Laurens, Neha Sandhir Bhavna Narula, Suntonu Bhadraplease do share your views. Did I do justice to the Haiku)

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