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Summary

A man drives home on a seemingly ordinary road, grappling with a powerful impulse to veer off into a cornfield, which overshadows his usual caution for deer crossings.

Abstract

The narrative describes a driver's journey on a straight and wide road, typically uneventful except for the occasional deer. However, on this particular breezeless night, the man's attention is consumed not by potential wildlife encounters but by an overwhelming compulsion to steer his vehicle into the adjacent cornfield. This urge is described as both constant and formidable, indicating a significant internal struggle as he maintains his course on what is otherwise characterized as an unremarkable road.

Opinions

  • The author conveys a sense of tension through the driver's white-knuckled grip on the steering wheel, suggesting an intense emotional or psychological conflict.
  • The description of the road as "unremarkable" contrasts with the driver's remarkable mental state, highlighting the subjective nature of what may be considered ordinary or extraordinary.
  • The mention of a "breezeless night" could imply a stillness or lack of external distractions, focusing the reader on the driver's inner turmoil.
  • The constant and formidable nature of the driver's urge implies a battle with a significant and persistent temptation or obsession.
  • The choice to drive home, despite the overwhelming impulse, indicates the driver's determination or perhaps a sense of duty or responsibility.

As He Drove on This Unremarkable Road

A prose

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He tightened his grip on the steering wheel as he drove on this unremarkable road.

The road was wide and straight. And deer was the only thing he should watch out for.

But he was not thinking of deer as he drove home this breezeless night.

He was suppressing the undeniable urge to drive the car into the cornfield.

The urge was constant and formidable as he drove on this unremarkable road.

Prose
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Death
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