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Summary

"Alice in the Luciferse — Chapter One" is a fan fiction piece that reimagines Alice in Wonderland in an alternative universe where Alice encounters demons and a version of herself with horns.

Abstract

The narrative "Alice in the Luciferse" presents an alternative universe to the classic tale of Alice in Wonderland. On her sixteenth birthday, Alice follows a peculiar rabbit through a black hole and finds herself in a universe called the Luciferse. Here, she meets her dream girl, who is a demon, and discovers she has horns herself. The story unfolds with Alice navigating this new reality, questioning the nature of demons, and forming a bond with her counterpart. The Cheshire Cat reappears, warning Alice to keep her true origin a secret and hinting at the complexities of this world. The story is interspersed with calls to action for Medium writers to share their personal stories through the "Be Open" challenge.

Opinions

  • Alice is initially skeptical about the existence of demons and demon central but becomes more accepting as she interacts with the demon girl and realizes her own transformation.
  • The Cheshire Cat is portrayed as enigmatic and cryptic, providing Alice with vague warnings and guidance.
  • The demon girl is depicted as caring and affectionate, contrary to Alice's initial expectations of a demon, which challenges preconceived notions about demons.
  • Alice's curiosity about her new surroundings and her adaptability to the extraordinary situations she encounters are central themes in the narrative.
  • The story suggests a deeper exploration of identity and self-acceptance as Alice comes to terms with her new appearance and the unfamiliar world she now inhabits.
  • The inclusion of the "Be Open" challenge indicates a desire to encourage writers to be vulnerable and open in their storytelling, mirroring Alice's own journey of self-discovery and acceptance in the fan fiction.

Alice in the Luciferse — Chapter One

In this fan fiction, it is an alternative universe and shared universe of Alice in Wonderland in a tale known as ‘Alice in the Luciferse.

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It was Alice’s sixteenth birthday party back home when she chases down the most peculiar of rabbits into a black hole in a tree.

Alice does not think too much of this. After her trip to wonderland, she wondered if she would ever get to go back, and she was ready.

But, she was the furthest from right as she finds out the hard way, landing herself not only in bed with the girl of her dreams, but in an alternative universe too known as Alice Morningstaar.

Soon after re-meeting the girl of her dreams, she sees the Cheshire cat floating about which disturbs Alice and she tells him to go away, but not before finding out she has landed herself in demon central, location Luciferse Universe.

Alice does not know what to think, or what to do.

“Demons? Demon Central? Those aren’t real!” Alice exclaimed with haste towards the cat as he evaporated before she could find out more — not that she wanted to. This was becoming too much for Alice.

Which was right when her beautiful counterpart awakened — and she had horns! Alice’s jaw dropped.

Maybe they are real… Alice thought as she attempted to keep her composure with unease.

“Alice? Where are you beautiful?” the beautiful, horned demon girl called out.

Alice’s face became devoid of all color as the demon girl approached her — and, to her elegant surprise, greeted her with a kiss.

The Cheshire cat appeared in the room's corner as Alice and her counterpart embraced long-form style as he said directly to Alice not to reveal that she is not from here, as things too are not how they may seem, and immediately dissipated — leaving Alice dazed and confused, possibly a little stunned.

“What’s up? You look like you don’t know where you are or how you got here. Everything all good, babe?” the demon girl asked with concern in her voice.

She just called me babe, I guess we’re really the close type — different from anything I had back home, but I'm not complaining… Alice thought to herself with a smile, as she loved this world more and more, and her curiosity would follow.

“Yeah, I'm okay.” Alice smiled to hide the thoughts flowing through her mind — and she felt more curious as ever as to where the white rabbit had gone now.

“You want an espresso? I’m beat after last night. How about you, Ali?” the mysterious demon girl asked with care in her voice.

An..espresso? Is a demon really offering me a coffee? Alice wondered in shock how a demon could be so kind, which is when she spotted her reflection in the mirror — and she had horns too!

“Alice?” as Alice appeared to be locked dead center in a zoned-out gaze, the demon girl shook Alice gently — trying to snap her out of it.

Alice near immediately snapped back to reality, hearing what the demon girl was saying as she responded with a jittery “yeah-h sure”.

“Okay cool…” the demon girl slowly turned back around to notice Alice had disappeared — nowhere to be found.

Be Open Says;

Editor’s Pick! So pleased to present you 1 of Be Open Platinum Stories created by: Rai Marie

Approved by Be Open’s Editors: A Shayens Abran & Lilith Morningstaar

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