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Summary

The text is a poetic expression of intense physical and emotional reactions to a lover's touch.

Abstract

The passage is a sensual and evocative piece that delves into the profound impact of a lover's intimate touch. It describes a cascade of physiological and emotional responses, from trembling legs and flushed skin to a cerebral overload, comparing the narrator's reactions to natural phenomena like a dandelion and a minefield. The text culminates in a plea for a repetition of the experience, highlighting the transformative power of the lover's hands, lips, and tongue. It is written by Sherry McGuinn, an award-winning screenwriter, who invites readers to explore more of her work.

Opinions

  • The author conveys a sense of wonder and astonishment at the depth of physical sensation caused by the lover.
  • There is an underlying theme of vulnerability and surrender to the overwhelming power of passion.
  • The repeated question "What have you done to me, down there?" emphasizes both confusion and awe at the intensity of the experience.
  • The comparison of body reactions to natural elements suggests an innate, uncontrollable response to the lover's actions.
  • The final question "And…can you do it, again?" expresses a desire for the reoccurrence of the intense pleasure, indicating a strong emotional connection and satisfaction with the intimate encounter.

Again

What have you done to me, down there?

What have you done to make my legs tremble so, like a dandelion gone to seed?

What have you done to make my body flush, like a teenager in heat?

What have you done to make my brain explode, like a cerebral minefield?

What have you done to me, down there?

What have you done with your fingers, to open my eyes?

What have you done with your lips, to make mine so lush?

What have you done with your tongue, to rip the scream from my throat?

What have you done to me, down there?

And…can you do it, again?

Sherry McGuinn is a longtime Chicago-area writer and award-winning screenwriter. Her work has appeared in The Chicago Tribune, Chicago Sun-Times and numerous other publications. Sherry’s manager is currently pitching her newest screenplay, a drama with dark, comedic overtones and inspired by a true story.

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