Respect Respect
A Tapestry of Respect
Four Poems Woven with Reverent Expression
Now that I am reacquainting myself with writing poetry, I enjoy taking on the challenge of writing in response to a poetry prompt. The respect/respect prompt hooked me right away! As I pondered respect as both a verb and a noun, I began to formulate several ideas. In the end, I decided to write short, unified poems that addressed the idea of respect from the point of view of people seeking respect, as well as people who deserve my respect.
Poetic Forms
Poem #1 is a didactic cinquain. The term cinquain in its simplest form is a five line poem, or a poem constructed of five-line stanzas, that follow specific rules related to the form. Teachers use didactic cinquains to teach writing non-rhyming poetry to younger students. In this poem, I use the method of counting syllables — line one/1 syllable, line two/2 syllables, line three/3 syllables, line four/4 syllables and returning to 1 syllable for the fifth line.
Poem #2 is an unpunctuated American Sentence (or a monoku traveling incognito in Florida, USA). It has the 17 syllable style of a monoku, but with a complete sentence structure. This is my first attempt at a monoku.
Poem #3 is a tanka, a Japanese poem consisting of 31 syllables in 5 lines. The first and third lines have 5 syllables. All the other lines have 7 syllables.
Poem #4 is….well it’s a cinquain because it has 5 lines. However, the structure is debatable. Iambic-ish?

(#1)
heed respect acknowledge my right to be me
(#2)
respect my respect for the disenfranchised maligned souls amongst us
(#3)
She commands respect. Her eyes bear the history you want to forget. She is determined to shield her progeny from your hate.
(#4)
Respect Earned not given Respect your impact On lives encountered in your quest For power
“Speaking truth to power remains a crucial role of the poet in the face of political and media rhetoric designed to obscure, manipulate, or worse.” source
The term “woke”, was used by Black Americans as early as the 1930s. Black American folk singer — songwriter, Leadbelly, used the phrase ”stay woke” referring to the need for Black Americans to remain vigilant and “keep their eyes open” when traveling through the American South. The term continued to be used to urge people to be alert to not only racial, but other forms of social injustice. In recent years conservative extremists have co-opted the term, using it as an insult against anything that they consider progressive or liberal politics.
My poems are my attempt to speak truth to power. I live in the state of Florida, USA. The governor, Ron DeSantis has declared “War on Woke”. The Respect for individual rights and human dignity have become collateral damage in this War on Woke.
Poem #1
Respect for Drag Queens/LGBTQ
I’m not sure what provoked the current anti-drag queen movement in America, but the movement has caught fire and is growing. In Florida, a popular restaurant chain, Hamburger Mary’s, has been presenting family-friendly drag shows for years. Governor DeSantis signed a law that would restrict children from attending any live performance involving drag, deeming them “adult live performances”. Fortunately, a federal judge blocked that law.
Poem #2 Respect for Immigrants/Migrant Farm Workers
In May 2023, Florida Governor Ron DeSantis signed SB 1718 into law, set to take effect on July 1. The law brings significant changes to the state’s immigration policies. These changes are likely to increase fears among immigrant families, negatively affecting their daily lives, physical health, and mental well-being. The requirement for hospitals to collect immigration status information may lead families, including U.S.-born child citizens, to avoid seeking healthcare, potentially impacting their health.
Poem #3 Respect for Black History/Critical Race Theory
Critical race theory is an academic discipline taught in graduate schools and higher education. It explores how racism has influenced U.S. laws and its ongoing impact on the lives of non-white individuals. Florida Governor Ron DeSantis’ Stop WOKE Act, aimed at countering race education, prohibits the teaching of race and diversity-related lessons and training in schools and workplaces. According to the Rev. Robert Montgomery, who holds a PhD in the social scientific studies of religion, it is crucial for young people to understand that America has made mistakes, particularly in oppressing various groups, but has also made efforts to correct those wrongs and will continue to do so. He emphasized the importance of acknowledging and learning from history. (Source: Asheville Citizen Times)
Poem #4 Respect for We the People/The Power of Voting
I think this one needs no explanation.
Thank you to my friend Carolyn Hastings for providing the July Prompt, and for her amusing and informative article explaining monoku (and the American Sentence).





