A Swan in Space

Summary

"A Swan in Space" is a heartfelt tribute to a creative and free-spirited friend who has passed away, celebrating their shared connection through art and reflecting on the friend's love for astronomy and music.

Abstract

The poem "A Swan in Space" is a poignant elegy for a friend known as S. Swan, who has transitioned. The author reflects on the initial captivation with the friend's profile, which showcased eyes filled with wonder. The friend, a visual artist and musician, is described as having a free-spirited nature, akin to a helium balloon floating through the clouds, unconstrained by earthly bounds. Despite the brief acquaintance, the author cherishes the creative exchange they shared, including mutual support for each other's work. The friend's untimely departure prompts questions about their inner world and the reasons behind their decision to leave. The author expresses deep sadness for the loss of someone so young and talented, yet finds solace in the belief that the friend's spirit continues to shine from beyond, perhaps finding peace and happiness in the vastness of space. The poem concludes with a hopeful note, wishing for a better existence for the departed.

Opinions

The author was deeply drawn to the friend's captivating eyes and free-spirited nature.
The friend's creativity in visual art and music is greatly admired by the author.
There is a sense of regret for not having more time to spend with the friend.
The author questions whether the friend felt lonely or unloved, and ponders if these feelings contributed to their decision to end their life.
The friend is likened to a swan, with the author hoping their "swan song" continues beyond the Milky Way.
The author expresses a mix of sadness for the loss and optimism for the friend's journey beyond, suggesting a belief in an afterlife where the friend may find happiness.
The poem conveys a sense of peace and hope with the idea that the friend has moved on to something better.

A poem for a friend who has transitioned.

When I saw your profile those big eyes, filled with wonder, drew me in They captivated me I immediately wanted to know who you were and I didn’t even know why I don’t know it could be A spiritual thing Once you accepted my request as a friend I immediately knew why You are a visual artist and musician Your thought pattern Was way out there I recently called you a Helium balloon🎈

Floating free through The clouds Not being tied down

This earth didn’t seem like it could contain you Your body may have been here but your spirit Was already deep in the farthest reaches of Space

I’ll cherish in the short time i’ve known you

You supported my writing and you shared with me your paintings

Such a creative mind I just wish we had more Time

Against the darkest void Your star seemed to Shine I wonder what goes on Inside of the head of Someone that doesn’t want to Live anymore Were you lonely?

Did you receive enough Love?

Maybe you were just Tired of being here

I don’t know but it just Makes me sad You were so young So beautiful inside and Out You loved music and you seemed to really Love astronomy I hope your swan song Continues on From the Milky Way and Beyond I hope you’re happier Where you are My friend Even though in this World You’ve reached the end I pray that wherever you Are

Something better For you Begins.

For S. Swan She would’ve loved the photo I chose.