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Summary

Azer experiences a terrifying night as he feels an unseen presence that induces paralyzing fear and prompts him to pray for protection.

Abstract

The narrative "A Night Terror" is a micro fiction piece under 50 words, inspired by real-life events. It tells the story of a man named Azer who, during a quiet night, senses something sinister gnawing at his hand. The brief encounter with an indescribable entity, referred to as "It," instills immediate fear in Azer. Overcome with terror, he closes his eyes and becomes immobilized, resorting to prayer in an attempt to ward off the perceived evil that he feels sitting on his chest, its heavy breathing and his own panic intertwining.

Opinions

  • The story conveys a profound sense of fear and helplessness experienced by the protagonist, Azer.
  • The use of a prayer as a defense mechanism suggests a reliance on spiritual or superstitious beliefs to combat fear.
  • The description of the entity as "It" adds to the ominous and mysterious nature of the terror Azer faces.
  • The imagery of the entity breathing heavily on Azer's chest evokes a sense of claustrophobia and impending doom.
  • The narrative implies that the terror experienced by Azer is not just physical but also psychological, as he is "panicking within."

A Night Terror

Micro Fiction Under 50 Words — Inspired by Real-Life Events

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A quiet night presides, as Azer felt something gnawing next to his thumb.

He saw It for a moment, and fear took over.

He closed his eyes, paralyzed with fear as he recited a prayer to shun the evil that sat idly on his chest, breathing heavily panicking within.

Horror
Fiction
Short Story
Storytelling
Poetry
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