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Summary

"A Memory And A Dream" is a prose poem by Lori Carlson that reflects on a poignant encounter with a captivating individual, blending memories and emotions.

Abstract

The poem "A Memory And A Dream" by Lori Carlson is a prose piece that captures the essence of a cherished memory intertwined with a dreamlike reverie. It describes an intimate gathering where the speaker is mesmerized by a person with sparkling green eyes and auburn curls. The individual's laughter, singing, and mere presence leave a lasting impression, evoking a range of emotions from enchantment to melancholy. Despite the speaker's yearning to express their admiration and spend more time with this enchanting figure, they ultimately part ways, leaving the experience as a treasured memory and a wistful dream. The poem is a response to Christine Graves' Word A Day prompt — "Green," and it showcases Carlson's talent for weaving vivid imagery and deep sentiment into her work.

Opinions

  • The speaker is deeply moved by the subject's presence, describing their eyes as sparkling like emeralds and their curls as dancing.
  • The subject's voice, capable of both soulful bellows and sassy renditions, is portrayed as having a profound impact on the speaker and the surrounding environment.
  • The speaker expresses regret for not confessing their devotion or spending more time with the subject, indicating a sense of lost opportunity and unfulfilled desire.
  • The poem suggests that the memory of the encounter has left an indelible mark on the speaker, transforming it into something dreamlike and ethereal.
  • The author invites readers to explore more of their poetry and other writings, indicating a pride in their body of work and a desire to connect with their audience further.

POETRY | PROMPTED RESPONSE

A Memory And A Dream

Prose poetry

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And there you are on the verge of memory. Lounging in laughter. Your green eyes sparkling like emeralds in the fire’s light. We’d come here, separately, to linger with friends, lavish in stories of travels and everyday life, and then listen to drumming and chanting far into the late evening.

I’d seen you before, but only from a distance. Now, you’d been close enough to observe. Your auburn curls dancing as you giggled at some joke I can no longer recall. I was mystified by your freckled face, trying to connect the dots in hopes of discovering your true essence. Fascinated by your pale, slim fingers flirting with a mutual friend’s legs. Oh how I wish you’d touched me that way.

I can still hear your angelic voice. Singing to a tune only you knew. Your sultry voice echoing through the forest, enchanting silent night creatures, like me. Soulful bellows so mournful that I cried. And then a sassy rendition of an Irish song that left me breathless and amused.

How I wish I’d had the courage to crouch down before you, confess my devotion and amazement of the goddess you are. Content to just be by your side for the countless hours we’d had left. And yet, as dawn approached, I cowered away, leaving you as only a memory and a dream.

©2022 Lori Carlson. All rights reserved.

This poem is in response to Christine Graves’s Word A Day prompt — Green

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Lori Carlson writes poetry, fiction, personal essays, creative non-fiction, and articles. She focuses on Spirituality, Life Lessons, Self-Awareness, Relationships, Mental Health, and LGBTQ+. She is the Owner/Editor of Promptly Written and Not For Bedtime Stories. You can find her older stories on her creative writing blog, Ravyne’s Nest and random ramblings on her personal blog, A Delicious Torment.

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