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Summary

A woman finds tranquility in solitude and self-reflection, contrasting with the societal norm of constant productivity and the pursuit of material success.

Abstract

The narrative poem "A Lost Soul" depicts a woman who embodies a sense of peace and contentment, despite societal expectations. She is portrayed as a lost soul, not in a negative sense, but as someone who has stepped away from the rat race and the pursuit of conventional achievements. Unburdened by the pressures of a workaholic culture, she chooses to focus on self-care and personal strength. The poem contrasts her stillness and happiness with the chaotic lives of others who are caught up in the relentless pursuit of promotions and financial gain, often at the expense of their well-being and personal dreams.

Opinions

  • The author presents a critical view of the societal obsession with productivity and financial gain, suggesting it leads to a loss of self and personal dreams.
  • The woman's choice to live a life focused on self is portrayed as an act of strength and a form of resistance against societal pressures.
  • The poem conveys a sense of irony, describing the woman as a "lost soul" in the title, yet she appears to be the one who has found true contentment.
  • The narrative implies that the conventional measures of success, such as promotions and increased income, are not synonymous with happiness or fulfillment.
  • The imagery of the woman watching the world from her apartment window symbolizes her detachment from the chaos of societal expectations and her immersion in a state of peaceful contemplation.

A Lost Soul

A (Prose) Poem

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Light spills through the window revealing a lost soul, devoid of personal goals. A shell of productivity and societal backlash at its most sanguine.

Unencumbered by the nuclear nature of happenstance She sits unburdened, a sense of calm washes over her as the world spins violently against the window of her third-floor apartment sparsely furnished and lacking aesthetic vision

But there she sat, content and unbothered. At peace and staunchly opposed to her neighbors clamoring out the door at 7:21 am to catch a bus or sit in traffic, while she just sat and looked out the window at all of the ants trying to build a hill.

She watched others try to achieve hustle and flow status by becoming workaholics and shelving all of their personal dreams in favor of $2,016 more per year, which also includes seven more hours a week

of work,

leaving even less time for self-care.

She spent her life focused on self An unflinching portrait of strength in a mirror of (lack of) ego while the rest spiraled in detest at their own lives, but continued the robotic progression to a small promotion and gigantic loss

of self.

And there she sat on the couch in her living room, staring out the window of her third-floor apartment in a non-descript area of town

A lost soul, devoid of personal goals.

Still

Amidst all the spinning

Happy

© Jonathan Greene 2020

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