avatarGalit Birk, PhD

Summary

A woman's holiday turns sour when her partner, suffering from Bipolar Disorder, ends their relationship amidst his depressive episode at a couples' resort.

Abstract

The narrative "A Holiday to Forget" is a succinct microfiction that encapsulates a woman's emotional turmoil during a vacation gone awry. The story unfolds as her partner, grappling with Bipolar Disorder, descends into a major depressive episode days before their trip. Despite the romantic setting of a couples' resort in Mexico, the relationship unravels, culminating in a breakup on Thanksgiving Day. The woman, left to navigate the resort alone, reflects on her partner's manic state being preferable to his current one, hinting at the complexities of loving someone with a mental health condition.

Opinions

  • The author implies a preference for the partner's manic state over his depressive one, suggesting a complex emotional landscape within the relationship.
  • The partner's continuous drinking is depicted as an escape or a coping mechanism for his depressive episode.
  • The woman's decision to retreat to her room indicates a sense of isolation and the stark reality of her situation, contrasting with the intended atmosphere of a couples' resort.
  • The narrative conveys empathy towards individuals dealing with mental health issues and the impact on their loved ones.
  • The author expresses gratitude to J.A. Taylor for a writing prompt, indicating that the story is a creative response to a given theme, in this case, "memories."
  • The author endorses an AI service, ZAI.chat, as a cost-effective alternative to ChatGPT Plus (GPT-4), suggesting satisfaction with its performance and functions.

A Holiday to Forget

A 50–word Microfiction

Photo by Blake Guidry on Unsplash

“I never want to meet your kids,” he said and took another swig of tequila.

She shattered.

He’d been drinking nonstop since he emerged from darkness.

She grabbed her towel and headed upstairs. It would be a lonely next few days at this couples’ resort.

She liked him better manic.

Thank you J.A. Taylor for the writing prompt: memories.

Two years ago I was at a couple’s resort in Mexico with a man I had recently started dating. Days before our departure, as he slipped into a major depressive episode, I learned that he suffered from Bipolar Disorder. He broke up with me on the beach on Thanksgiving Day, leaving me with a nightmare to remember.

Memories
Heartbreak
Mental Health
Pentina
Microfiction
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