avatarAK (Aaska Aejaz)

Summary

The content reflects the author's deep yearning for personal success and fulfillment, expressed through a poetic narrative that grapples with the emotional turmoil of waiting for their moment to shine.

Abstract

The author of the web content, a self-identified dreamer, shares a personal and emotive response to a Dead Poets Live prompt, titled "A Dreamer Like Me." The text is a poignant expression of the author's struggle with feelings of stagnation and the pain of unfulfilled aspirations. It paints a vivid picture of the author's internal world, filled with poetic imagery of their words rhyming upon the clouds and rhythms that touch hearts. Despite the exhaustion and heartache of waiting for their turn, the author holds onto the hope of brighter days and the realization of their dreams. The piece concludes with an invitation for readers to explore more of the author's work, including a response to another prompt, "Window Poems," reinforcing the theme of hope and reflection.

Opinions

  • The author feels a profound sense of impatience and frustration, questioning when their efforts will be rewarded.
  • There is a strong emotional undertone, with the author's eyes flowing at night and their heart breaking every minute.
  • The author's passion for writing is evident, as they describe their words and rhythms creating melodies and touching hearts.
  • The struggle between reality and the author's visualizing world is causing a mental and emotional toll, weakening their survival capabilities.
  • Despite the hardships, the author maintains a hopeful outlook, eagerly anticipating their turn for success and happiness.
  • The author's motto of serving humanity, making peace, and sharing love suggests a deep commitment to positive social impact.
  • The inclusion of a link to another piece indicates the author's desire to engage with an audience and share their creative journey.

Prompt: _______ Like Me.

A Dreamer Like Me!

My Response to Dead Poets Live Prompt

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Where will be my turn? Everything is going to seem dark Every dot of my life is becoming a full stop I’m wondering, why I stand still with empty hands Every night my eyes flow, every minute my heart breaks Step by step, every moment my nerves exhaust, my breath stops

For those good days… I’m waiting for my turn For dreams come true… I’m waiting for my turn

I’m imagining my fantasy world around me My words are rhyming upon the clouds on the sky My rhythms are creating melodies, touching every heart My dark circles are telling the story of my visualizing world My surviving capabilities are going weak and futile for thinking

Oh, I’m desperately waiting for my turn!

A dreamer like me Asking several times Just one question to myself Where will be my turn?

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My motto of life is to serve humanity, to make peace & to share Love!

If you liked my piece and want to read more so, here’s a link to another of my Dead Poets Live’ piece!

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