Summary

Jared's eagerly anticipated pool day is unexpectedly moved indoors due to a sudden change in weather, but his parents creatively adapt the plans to ensure he still enjoys his "pool time" fun in the bathtub.

Abstract

Jared wakes up excited for a day of fun at the pool, with his parents preparing floats and smoothies. His anticipation builds as he envisions playing water games with his friend under the sun. However, the joy is temporarily dampened when a sudden weather change forces them to cancel the outdoor activities. Jared is heartbroken, but his parents quickly devise a plan to continue the fun in the bathroom tub, lifting his spirits with a creative alternative to the pool.

Opinions

The author conveys a sense of excitement and anticipation for the pool day, highlighting Jared's enthusiasm for outdoor activities.
There is a strong sense of family unity and care, as both parents actively participate in making Jared's day special.
The story reflects the resilience and adaptability of children and parents in the face of unexpected changes, emphasizing the importance of making the best out of any situation.
The sudden weather change is presented as a minor setback that is effectively overcome with imagination and resourcefulness.
The narrative suggests that fun and joy can be found in simple pleasures, like playing in the bathtub, when the original plan doesn't work out.

A Day At The Pool

A response to a “Pool Time” writing prompt

Jared woke up from his sleep

And remembered the day it was of the week

Breaking free from his dream of flowers and meadow

He saw the sun shining at his window

He fixed his bed as quickly as he could

And made his way to get his morning food

He ran to the garden to feel the soft breeze

And saw mom in the kitchen,

making fresh and colorful smoothies.

Dad was busy getting the floats ready

So the donuts and pizzas would be strong and steady.

The water in the pool looked beautifully blue

Jared could only imagine the things he would do!

Playing with beach balls and fun water games

And the other things that will keep them fully entertained

His nine year old friend will be joining him for the fun

Until they both get tired from staying under the sun!

Staying home during the lockdown was not at all fun

Until summer came

and now Jared could enjoy outdoor pool time!

Mom asked Jared to go and get changed

He jumped in joy

and went to get his essentials arranged

He got his favorite beach towel from his closet

That had pictures of cakes and chocolate

Excited to show his friend all his favorite moves in the water

And had plans for the computer games they would play after.

Jared has never been so excited for the pool

After all — dad was home to make his time super playful

Mom would join in later to double the fun

Until it would be time for lunch and that’s when she’d be done.

Little Jared packed his things and ran downstairs

And realized there has been a change in the weather

Alas — sudden clouds have conspired to ruin the day for him

His little heart broke as the outside looked grim

His parents asked him to stay indoors

Without seeing his face, which went sadly ignored.

Tears rolled down his little cheeks

As Jared could barely speak

Mom rushed to console his heart

And realized how badly he was hurt

Dad came into rescue and had a change of plan

To play in the bathroom tub

And avoid the unexpected rain

Jared finally wiped tears from his eyes

And was cheerful by dad’s perfect surprise

Got excited all over again

Happy that his pool time fun

Would not go in vain!

This is in response to Timothy Key’s prompt of ‘Pool Time’. Hope you enjoyed reading it!