avatarEddie Becker

Summary

The poem "#514 (a romantic rhyme for my wife)" celebrates the author's deep affection and admiration for his wife, highlighting her unique qualities and the joy she brings to his life.

Abstract

The poem "#514 (a romantic rhyme for my wife)" is a heartfelt tribute to the author's wife, capturing the essence of their love and companionship. It describes her captivating features, such as her green eyes and pink lips, and the comfort and strength she provides. The author likens her to a nurturing force that keeps his life afloat while outshining others. Her playful and caring nature is depicted through scenes of Saturday mornings filled with chocolate chip pancakes and the warmth of her presence. The poem also alludes to her resilience and balance between work and play, drawing a parallel to the character of Mariska Hargitay's determined yet empathetic detective persona. The author expresses his love by acknowledging her as his guiding law and order, his reason for committing to marriage, and the person who completes him, giving credit to both her and a higher power for their union.

Opinions

  • The author is deeply in love with his wife, finding her both emotionally comforting and strong.
  • He views her as unique and irreplaceable, believing she eclipses all others in his life.
  • The poem suggests that the wife has a playful, youthful spirit, as well as a nurturing side, symbolized by the making of pancakes.
  • The author admires his wife's ability to maintain a balance between her responsibilities and enjoying life, which he finds incredibly attractive.
  • He draws inspiration from her, comparing her to a beloved television character known for her strength and compassion.
  • The act of giving her a ring and marrying her is presented as an inevitable and joyful decision, reflecting his deep commitment and love for her.
  • The author acknowledges a higher power's role in their relationship, suggesting a spiritual or religious aspect to their love and union.

#514 (a romantic rhyme for my wife)

Saturday mornings with the love of my life

Photo by Madalyn Cox on Unsplash

it’s the green in her eyes it’s her lips that are pink keeps my ship afloat makes the other boats sink it’s her smile, it’s her hug it’s her kiss, it’s her touch it’s her on the curb ponytail Double Dutch chocolate chip pancakes a.m. Saturday she’s soft but she’s tough like Mariska Hargitay all work but all play she’s my Law and Order she’s jumping all my fences and crossing every border had to give her a ring her pitch was right down the middle had no choice but to swing had to marry the queen give due praise to the King

Poetry
Marriage
Love
Romance
Illumination Poetry
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