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Summary

The article outlines two key traits of successful Medium authors, emphasizing the importance of a captivating first sentence and engaging storytelling in the opening paragraph to draw readers in.

Abstract

The piece, aimed at Medium writers seeking to enhance their article engagement, distills the essence of successful storytelling by examining the habits of top-earning authors on the platform. It underscores the significance of crafting a compelling first sentence that can evoke strong emotions, provoke thought, or spark curiosity. Additionally, it highlights the power of a well-told personal narrative in the initial paragraph to captivate the audience's attention. The author, Jessica Rabel, provides statistical evidence from a study of top-performing articles in popular Medium publications, offering practical advice and encouraging writers to emulate and adapt these techniques to improve their own writing and reader engagement.

Opinions

  • The author suggests that writing for Medium differs significantly from academic writing, advocating for a more engaging, storytelling approach.
  • There is an emphasis on the importance of research and learning from successful authors, with the author endorsing the idea of "stealing" techniques rather than plagiarizing content.
  • The article conveys that a strong opening sentence can make or break a reader's interest, with data showing that the majority of top stories have a powerful first line.
  • Personal stories and emotional connections are seen as powerful tools for engaging readers, with the author providing examples of how this can be effectively done.
  • The author encourages writers to practice writing attention-grabbing sentences and to study storytelling to enhance their articles' appeal.
  • The piece concludes with a call to action, urging readers to apply the advice given and not just passively consume the information.
  • Supplementary resources are provided for readers who wish to delve deeper into the topic of improving their writing on Medium.

2 Traits of Top-Earning Medium Authors

Read this if you feel lost on how to start your articles

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You have to get a million readers to like you in 3 seconds or less.

Well, probably not a million. It’s more like 100.

Writing a killer intro when you’re a beginner is like trying to pull blood from a turnip. You’re still new, green, and have that voice inside you screaming, “you don’t know what you’re doing! No one will read this!”

Most people give up and fall back on the way they were taught to write in school.

Not the greatest idea.

Writing for Medium is a whole different animal. You’re trying to seduce the reader into becoming so enthralled with your story that they forget about time.

It’s not as much about imparting information as it is about learning the art of storytelling and persuasion.

I know what’s running through your mind.

You’re afraid that no one will read your work.

You’re paralyzed into falling back on your old techniques that don’t work.

It’s a vicious cycle.

Thankfully, there are loads of articles on Medium written by expert authors who are great at storytelling. I’ve been incorporating their techniques into my own writing, and my views have spiked.

When in doubt, steal, steal, steal!

I don’t mean to plagiarize other people’s work. I mean that you need to study what they’re doing right.

There might even be a few resources at the end of this story, just waiting to be snatched up by a talented new author like you.

Let’s dive right into it.

How top-earning authors suck readers in

Trait #1 — They include a show-stopping first sentence

I studied three large, beginner-friendly Publications for this article: Age of Awareness, Illumination, and The Shortform.

I searched for “top stories 2021 ___(name of publication)___”. This brings you to a list of the top stories for each year the publication has been open. You can also click on each month for more stories.

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It’s an awesome research tool for the spreadsheet nerds out there.

I looked at 18 top stories total and wrote down the opening sentences of each one. Here are some examples.

“Reading is a basic tool in the living of a good life,” Mortimer J. Adler said. I disagree. — Eva Keiffenheim

Distraction is often thought of as just a problem of the modern age. — Joe Hunt

I have one bag of clothes, one backpack with a computer, iPad, and phone. I have zero other possessions. — James Altucher

Out of the 18 stories, here are the stats:

  • No opening sentence (3)
  • A funny or emotional personal story summed up into one opening sentence (5)
  • A bold or controversial opening sentence describing a specific event, news story, or concept (10)

15/18 articles had a first sentence that packed a punch.

  • Made the reader laugh
  • Evoked a very strong emotion
  • Touched a sensitive pain point
  • Sparked a furious controversy
  • Was so interesting that they had to keep reading for curiosity’s sake

Trait #2 — They tell a story in the first paragraph that makes the reader forget where they are

Here’s a great example of a personal story that sparks the reader’s curiosity. This first paragraph, combined with an interesting Title, made for a very clickable read.

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My son was sixteen when he got himself a job. He networked through friends and found out about a fast food business that needed employees. We found out why later. — Ruby Lee

  • Painting a picture of the audience’s problems by listing them out, one by one (4)
  • Personal life story (10)
  • Interesting news story (8)

The objective was to draw in the reader so that they became so engaged in the story that they wanted to finish it. They didn’t tell the entire thing, just enough to spark curiosity, then they finished it in a grand finale at the very end.

Takeaways

  • Open a fresh Medium document. Practice writing single sentences that grab an audience’s attention. Study headlines from popular magazines like Readers Digest. They are great about getting people interested in their stories.
  • Study storytelling. Seriously. Practice taking small events from your life that stick out, then write a paragraph about it. Use bright, vivid imagery with funny comments and interesting details. Choose a specific emotion to target in the story.
  • When you write conclusions, make the takeaway tips part of the reader’s transformation. Take their fears from the first paragraph, incorporate them with the solutions from the article and summarize to show the reader the new person they can become.

When you started reading this article, your mind was filled with doubts about your writing abilities.

You were fearful that no one would read your articles or (even worse!) that you would get a bunch of negative comments.

After reading this article, you’ve realized that you have the capability to become an amazing storyteller.

Just a few tweaks in your writing will make a huge difference in drawing people in.

Trust me, it worked in my writing. Once I started telling stories in the intro, my read time went up dramatically.

Now go and actually do it.

Don’t just read these How To articles, say, “that’s nice” and forget about them.

For more information on this topic, check out these articles:

What Shocked Me About the First Month’s Earnings on Medium

You Don’t Have To Be a Medium Superstar To Get More Story Views

Templates for Writing an Article People Will Actually Read

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