avatarG.R. MELVIN

Summary

The poem reflects on the struggle of maintaining peace and gratitude in the face of adversity, contemplating the act of self-reliance and personal agency over passive acceptance.

Abstract

The text is a contemplative poem that delves into the internal conflict of a speaker who considers the difficulty of adhering to pacifism, possibly feeling ill-suited for such a role. The speaker ponders the resistance to wasting time and the potential desire to take action into their own hands, suggesting a proactive stance in seeking self-mercy and gratitude rather than relying on external, possibly divine, interventions. The poem subtly hints at a distancing from religious reliance, indicated by the lowercase representation of "Jesus," and emphasizes the speaker's inclination to thank themselves more, implying a shift towards self-sufficiency and personal responsibility.

Opinions

  • The speaker acknowledges a possible mismatch with the role of a pacifist, indicating self-doubt or societal expectations.
  • There is a clear resistance to the passive consumption of time, suggesting a value for productivity and purposeful action.
  • The poem conveys a desire for self-reliance, as seen in the speaker's inclination to take matters into their own hands and the idea of removing one's mask, symbolizing authenticity and transparency.
  • The text hints at a critique of over-reliance on prayer and mercy from an external source, advocating instead for personal agency and self-acknowledgment.
  • The mention of "Jesus" in lowercase, contrasted with the capitalization of "I," may indicate a diminished role of religious figures in the speaker's life, emphasizing the self over the divine.
  • The poem concludes with an emphasis on self-thanking, reinforcing the theme of self-empowerment and the importance of self-recognition for one's efforts and achievements.
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RIGHTEOUSNESS VERSE

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If I’d insist on playing the pacifist

(I’m maybe miscast)

I’d resist being all-too-willing

to killing time.

If I would want to resist the persistent praying

For my mercy, for all our mercy,

Inarticulate verses of mercy,

Maybe I’d want to take steps,

I’d want to take things into my own hands,

Maybe I’d want to take on the task

Of yanking my mask off,

Of thinking of thanking

myself more.

Tho’ I’d heed less

Jesus

Righteousness
Mercy
Self Love
Resister
Humble
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